homework
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Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor?
These days, most people don't know who lives near their house.
When I was young, I got along with neighbors. I used to visit their house and I gave them something to eat. I spent a lot of time with neighbors.
But as time goes, it becomes difficult to get long with neighbors.
People don't like to appear themselves.
So I think the best neighbors is to keep their nose out of my business.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Amy!I love your answer. I fully agree to what you have said. It\'s nice to have friends to talk to sometimes, but it\'s better if they would keep their noses our of our business.Take care always and I hope you are enjoying your time now. Have a blessed day!Teacher MichelleHere are some corrections for you:Neighbors are the people who live near us. >>CorrectIn your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor?>>CorrectThese days, most people don\'t know who lives near their house. >>Correct
When I was young, I got along with neighbors.>>When I was young, I got along with my neighbors.I used to visit their house and I gave them something to eat. >>I used to visit their houses and I gave them something to eat. I spent a lot of time with neighbors. >>I spent a lot of time with my neighbors. But as time goes, it becomes difficult to get long with neighbors.>>But as time goes by, it becomes difficult to get long with my neighbors.People don\'t like to appear themselves. >>People don\'t like to meet others. So I think the best neighbors is to keep their nose out of my business. >>So I think the best neighbors are keeping their noses out of my business.
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