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I want to be a dog, because I like to play and run.
I really want to try to snif and hear better than a human.
And I want to be a cat also because I an hear more sounds jump up to high places.
But It is the best to be a human and also it will be nice to try.
^^ have a great day thank you~
강사 첨삭
Hi, Yuri!
Oh, that sounds really interesting.
Thank you for sharing~
T. Roanne ^_^
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I want to be a dog, because I like to play and run.
>> Correct!
I really want to try to snif and hear better than a human.
I really want to try to snif and hear better than a human.
>> I really want to try to sniff and hear better than a human.
And I want to be a cat also because I an hear more sounds jump up to high places.
And I want to be a cat also because I an hear more sounds jump up to high places.
>> Correct!
But It is the best to be a human and also it will be nice to try.
But It is the best to be a human and also it will be nice to try.
>> But it is better to be a human and also it will be nice to try.
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