Homework
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What scares you most about the future?
--> I amg scaring about the future because of only 2 things. Firstly, Health must be protected until I get old. Fear of economic poverty is also one of the reasons for fear of the future. I am currently trying hard to prepare for these fears.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Bo Im!
We fear something that we do not know or something that the outcome is unknown because we lack preparation for. In your case, you know very well that preparation is key to the fears of uncertainty.
Therefore, don\'t fear. The future comes to those who are ready to face it.
Thank you and see you in a couple of hours.
-T. Donna =)
I amg scaring about the future because of only 2 things.
>> I am scared about the future because of only two things.
Firstly, Health must be protected until I get old.
>> Firstly(First), health must be protected until I get old.
Fear of economic poverty is also one of the reasons for fear of the future.
>> Correct!
I am currently trying hard to prepare for these fears.
>> Correct!
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