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I think junk food it is not a nice thing to eat.
but we could learn more about junk food.
and if we make it with good ingredients.
I think good ingredient junk food will not be very bad ether.
but I prefer to not take junk food to school.
so we could be healthy.
thank you ^^
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Hi, Yuri!
Wow! I\'m amazed that you can think that way. That sounds really good. Improving junk foods to make it a better and healthier one is actually a good idea. Let\'s hope they will make something like that.
Thank you for sharing!
~T. Roanne ^_^
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I think junk food it is not a nice thing to eat.
>> Correct!
but we could learn more about junk food. and if we make it with good ingredients.
but we could learn more about junk food. and if we make it with good ingredients.
>> But we could learn more about junk food and if we make it with good ingredients.
I think good ingredient junk food will not be very bad ether.
>> I think good ingredient junk food will not be very bad either.
but I prefer to not take junk food to school. so we could be healthy
but I prefer to not take junk food to school. so we could be healthy
>> But I prefer to not take junk food to school, so we could be healthy.
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