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I will like to invent no wight school bag.
Because school bags are heavy and hard to carry.
so I think I could invent school bags with no wight.
how much you put there will still be no wight.
so it will be light and good~
and also a shrinker only for shrinking rubbish.
because of the rubbish earth is having a hard time so I think a rubbish shrinker is very good
thank you~
강사 첨삭
Wow! That\'s brilliant, Yu Ri! I wish you could invent these machines someday. See you!-Faith-
I will like to invent no wight school bag.>> I would like to invent a weightless school bag.
Because school bags are heavy and hard to carry.
>> It\'s because school bags are heavy and hard to carry.
so I think I could invent school bags with no wight.
Because school bags are heavy and hard to carry.
>> It\'s because school bags are heavy and hard to carry.
so I think I could invent school bags with no wight.
>> So, I think I could invent school bags with no weight.
how much you put there will still be no wight. so it will be light and good~
how much you put there will still be no wight. so it will be light and good~
>> No matter how much you put there, it will still be the same so that it will be light and good.
and also a shrinker only for shrinking rubbish.
>> Also, a shrinker only for shrinking rubbish.
because of the rubbish earth is having a hard time so I think a rubbish shrinker is very good
>> Because of rubbish, earth is having a hard time so I think a rubbish shrinker is very good.
thank you~
because of the rubbish earth is having a hard time so I think a rubbish shrinker is very good
>> Because of rubbish, earth is having a hard time so I think a rubbish shrinker is very good.
thank you~
>> Thank you~
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