homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I think pilot is a good job. 

>> I think being a pilot is a good job. 

It\'s because the pilot is driving to many countries. 

>> It\'s because pilots get to fly to many countries. 

And in order for us to travel abroad, we need a job as a pilot. And I think the job of a pilot is cool.

>> In order for us to travel abroad, we need a pilot so I think the job of a pilot is cool.