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I prefer the active trips but different at time.
But I don\'t like hinking the mountain.
I like the city famous food eat and city famous place go there.
And in night I like go lodging in there I go to bed or food eating and talk with friends.
So I like afternoon active trips I like but in night little relaxing trips I like.
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~ T. CamilleI prefer the active trips but different at time.
>> I prefer active trips, but it could be different at times.
But I don\'t like hinking the mountain.
But I don\'t like hinking the mountain.
>> However, I don\'t like hiking.
I like the city famous food eat and city famous place go there.
I like the city famous food eat and city famous place go there.
>> I like the city because I could eat the famous food, and go to famous places.
And in night I like go lodging in there I go to bed or food eating and talk with friends.
And in night I like go lodging in there I go to bed or food eating and talk with friends.
>> And at night, I like lodging with my friends because we could eat the food that we like while talking to each other.
So I like afternoon active trips I like but in night little relaxing trips I like.
So I like afternoon active trips I like but in night little relaxing trips I like.
>> I like active trips in the afternoon, but I like a bit relaxing trips at night.
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