homework
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I have a snack every time I want.
But, My mother stop me I eat snacks so lot.
I eat snacks once a day.
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I eat snacks once a day.
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Your Answer: I have a snack every time I want.
But, My mother stop me I eat snacks so lot.I eat snacks once a day.
Corrected Answer: I have a snack every time I want.
But my mother stopped me from eating a lot of snacks.
I eat snacks once a day.
But my mother stopped me from eating a lot of snacks.
I eat snacks once a day.
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