Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What is your favorite celebration?
--> As I get older, it seems meaningless to celebrate my anniversaries. It\'s a little sad, but maybe it\'s natural.
Back to the point, my favorite anniversary is children\'s birthdays. This is because celebrating my children\'s birthdays and seeing them happy makes me feel happy.
강사 첨삭
Good day Bo Im!
Children\'s birthday parties are so adorable and so innocent. You can see unadulterated reactions from them and you can\'t help but to feel young again.
On the other hand, celebrating anniversaries mark milestones in relationships. Maybe some tv drama level up our expectations when it comes to how to celebrate them. A simple one is a reminder that the people we celebrate with will be with us forever.
Thanks for sharing these. See you!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
Back to the point, my favorite anniversary is children\'s birthdays.
>> Correct!
This is because celebrating my children\'s birthdays and seeing them happy makes me feel happy.
>> Correct!
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