HoMeWoRk
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I want to be a president because I want to make kids happy in my country.First what I\'ll do is to strength the child abuse law.Second, I will make a good school for education. I want to make kids happy. So, I want to be a president.
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Hi President [이름]! ^^
I think being the president of a country is hard. He needs to decide and solve a lot of problems.
If I can be another person in a day, I want to be nobody. Haha. I am enjoying my life so I don\'t need to become another person.
See you on Tuesday! ^^
Teacher Andrea
I want to be a president because I want to make kids happy in my country.
>>> I want to be a president because first, I want to make kids happy in my country.
First what I\'ll do is to strength the child abuse law.
>>> Then, if I can do that, I want to strengthen the law for child abuse.
Second, I will make a good school for education.
>>> Finally, I will make a better school for better education.
I want to make kids happy. So, I want to be a president
>>> I want to makes children happy so I will choose to become the president.
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