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I think exam is a opportunity for my ability.
And exam is differentiate student.
So exam I have that job or haven\'t that job.
Because If you\'re not good at studying, you can\'t go good university and department.
So I think exam is very important but I  don\'t think exams are everything.
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~ T. CamilleI think exam is a opportunity for my ability.
>> I think exams give an opportunity to test my abilities.
And exam is differentiate student.
>> And exams are different for each students.
So exam I have that job or haven\'t that job.
>> In exams, it could be a basis whether I could get a good job in the future, or not.
Because If you\'re not good at studying, you can\'t go good university and department.
>> If you\'re not good at studying, you can\'t go to a good university and department.
So I think exam is very important but I  don\'t think exams are everything.
>> So, I think exams are very important, but I don\'t think exams are everything.
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