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2012-02-15 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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1. The shipments will arrive (either) today or the next day. 2. (Both) Sarah and Danica wnet to the park. 3. We are trying to decide (nor) to support the Republicans or to support the Democrats. 4. I haven't driven before, (if) I feel a little nervous. 5. The puppies were cute, (but) very naughty. I closed my savings account yesterday. I spent a lot of money this winter. It charged my credit card bill over one million won for three months. I went to trip, bought a expensive bag, registered Power English, went to ski resort several. And I met a priest with helping Bolivians. I know well he is very faithful, so I helped him. And Korean money is worth of 10 times in Bolivia. This is the best to be spent worth my money this winter. Now, I'm beggar.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name], happy Wednesday! Thank you so much for dropping in your composition today.. I\'m also glad to hear that you had a wonderful time with your friends. And about your savings account, don\'t woory you can still earn money my dear. The moest important thing is you enjoyed your time and that is worth the money you paid..:)Talk to you again later Miss. [Name]..^^ and Happy Valentine\'s Day my dear Teacher Cam 1. The shipments will arrive (either) today or the next day.>>correct2. (Both) Sarah and Danica wnet to the park.>>correct3. We are trying to decide (nor) to support the Republicans or to support the Democrats.>>We are trying to decide whether to support the Republicans or to support the Democrats.4. I haven\'t driven before, (if) I feel a little nervous.>>correct5. The puppies were cute, (but) very naughty.>>correctI closed my savings account yesterday.>>correctI spent a lot of money this winter. >>correctIt charged my credit card bill over one million won for three months.>>correctI went to trip, bought a expensive bag, registered Power English, went to ski resort several. >>I went to trip, bought an expensive bag, registered in Power English,and went to ski resort several.And I met a priest with helping Bolivians. >>I also met a missionary.I know well he is very faithful, so I helped him. >>I know well that he is very faithful so I helped him.And Korean money is worth of 10 times in Bolivia. >>And Korean money is worth 10 times in Bolivia.This is the best to be spent worth my money this winter. >>This is the best way to spend my money this winter.Now, I\'m beggar. >>And now I\'m a beggar.

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