homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'m reading a book about friendship at school these days, and it\'s so fun. And I also like reading comic books online. Because I can read books of various genres.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Reading Online Books are called E-BOOKS. Reading Books Online is also a great way to unwind. Young people and adults these days find reading physical books extremely challenging. That is the primary reason why contemporary learners are picking eBooks which are a mix of serious reading, musical rhymes, animation, and much more. Enjoy Reading. ~ Teacher QUENNY :).
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I\'m reading a book about friendship at school these days, and it\'s so fun.
>> I\'m reading a book about friendship at school these days, and it\'s so fun.(CORRECT)
And I also like reading comic books online. Because I can read books of various genres.
>> And I also like reading comic books online because I can read books of various genres.
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I\'m reading a book about friendship at school these days, and it\'s so fun. And I also like reading comic books online. Because I can read books of various genres.
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