homework
학생이 쓴 원문
In my dream, I was at home.
My mom asked me to go outside, so I went outside.
There was a cliff outside.
My mom fell, so I fell.
There was also my house there.
I went to bed and slept.
강사 첨삭
Hello Jessica!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
In my dream, I was at home.
>> CORRECT!
My mom asked me to go outside, so I went outside.
>> CORRECT!
There was a cliff outside.
>> CORRECT!
My mom fell, so I fell.
>> CORRECT!
OR
>> My mom fell so I also fell.
There was also my house there.
>> CORRECT!
I went to bed and slept.
>> CORRECT!
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