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2021-11-25 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I think best city in South Korea is Asan because I live in Asan.

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Hi Jiyu:)

I heard so many great things about your city. I want to go there someday as well. Can you tell me more about it?

PS: Kindly expand your answers a little bit more. ^^

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I think best city in South Korea is Asan because I live in Asan.
>> I think the best city in South Korea is Asan because I live there.

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