Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
No. Because animals might want there own time.
or animals will be sad.
Yes. Because the ZOO couldn\'t get money.
So they keep the animals in zoo.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this So Eun.
Have a good day!
No. Because animals might want there own time. or animals will be sad.
>>> No, because animals might want their own time or animals will be sad.
Have a good day!
No. Because animals might want there own time. or animals will be sad.
>>> No, because animals might want their own time or animals will be sad.
>>> OR: No, because animals might want freedom or animals will be sad encaged in the zoo.
Yes. Because the ZOO couldn\'t get money. So they keep the animals in zoo.
Yes. Because the ZOO couldn\'t get money. So they keep the animals in zoo.
>>> OR: Yes, because the ZOO could get money if they keep the animals in zoo.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.