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work/study helps us escape from three evils : boredom, vice, poverty My opinion I'm opposed to this opinion. If this opinion is right, idle(out of work)is everyone boredom, vice, proverty? No.never. Let's think housewife. All day housewife take care of a baby, cleaning and laundry. Housewife don't have time work and study. so housewife boredom, vice, proverty? No.never. Housewife happy. because she have family. All day she happy with baby. therefore i'm opposed to this opinion.

Hi there Lina! Thank you for making your assignment today. It is a great accomplishment to finish your composition. Keep up the good work my dear! -Teacher Lorraine-   Here are my corrections for you: My opinion >>In my opinion.I\'m opposed to this opinion. >>I opposed to this opinion. If this opinion is right, idle(out of work)is everyone boredom, vice, proverty? >>If this opinion is right, idle(out of work)is everyone boredom, vice, proverty?No.never. >>No, it was never.Let\'s think housewife. >>Let\'s think of a housewife.All day housewife take care of a baby, cleaning and laundry. >>All day the housewife is taking care of a baby, cleaning and doing the laundry.Housewife don\'t have time work and study. >>A housewife don\'t have time to work and study.so housewife boredom, vice, proverty? >>So, a housewife experience some boredom, vice, proverty?No.never. >>No, it was never.Housewife happy. because she have family. >>A housewife should be happy because she have a family. All day she happy with baby. >>All day she is happy with her baby.therefore i\'m opposed to this opinion. >>Therefore, I opposed to this opinion.