Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What makes a memory unfrogettable?
--> Usually, If the memories were very good or very bad, we could remember them very well.
I hope to keep only good memories. I don\'t think bad memories help me much in my life.
강사 첨삭
Hello Bo Im!
In life, we can choose what memories stay and go. If we want a better quality of life, then we ought to choose those that make us joyful and contented. This perhaps is the secret to a peaceful and blissful living.
Thank you for this concise and on point answer! See you later.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
Or: Usually, if the memories were very good or very bad, we could remember them very well. (small letter \"i\")
I hope to keep only good memories. I don\'t think bad memories help me much in my life.
I hope to keep only good memories. I don\'t think bad memories help me much in my life.
>> Correct!
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