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2021-11-30 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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would you visiting my country, you want to show good manners, First, You shoud good at greeting. Second, You should use the restroom cleanly.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jessica!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


would you visiting my country, you want to show good manners,

>> If you would be visiting my country and you want to show good manners, here\'s what you should do.
First, You shoud good at greeting.

>> First, you should be good at greeting.
Second, You should use the restroom cleanly.

>> Second, you should use the restroom cleanly.

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