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ESSAY : Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Well I think having a lot of information is good, and you can find informations quickly when you use INTERNET.
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Hi Rosie. I know it is good to give a straight-to-the-point answer but could you at least elaborate further? Give your reasons and some examples. Your answer is even shorter than my question. Hi hi hi. Thank you Rosie! ^_^
ESSAY : Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Well I think having a lot of information is good, and you can find informations quickly when you use INTERNET.
Well I think having a lot of information is good, and you can find informations quickly when you use INTERNET.
>>> Well I think knowing a lot of information is good, and you can find them quickly when you use the INTERNET.
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