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I think best way to spend time with my family is more talking.
Because they don\'t know if I don\'t tell my family.
So I think important way for good family.
And I think best way to spend time with my family is go on a trip.
Because trip is good memory in your life.
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Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille>> I think best way to spend time with my family is by talking more.
OR >> I think best way to spend time with my family is by having more communication with them.
Because they don\'t know if I don\'t tell my family.
>> That\'s because they wouldn\'t know if I don\'t tell my family something about my day or other things.
So I think important way for good family.
>> So I think having a communication with your family is important, and it\'s a good way for making our relationship stronger.
And I think best way to spend time with my family is go on a trip.
>> Also, I think it\'s best to spend time with my family when we go on a trip.
Because trip is good memory in your life.
>> That\'s because going on a trip brings good memories in your life.
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