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2021-12-03 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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I lived in this apartment for seven years. My house is good because it has great sunlight. My house is close to my school.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jessica!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I lived in this apartment for seven years.

>> I\'ve lived in this apartment for seven years.
My house is good because it has great sunlight.

>> My house is good because the sunlight coming through the windows is great.
My house is close to my school.

>> My house is also close to my school.

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