Homework
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What is an efficient way of handing finances?
--> It is not easy to finance efficiently. I happened to be consulted by a securities firm about asset management, and sometimes they give me good information. When I listened to their information and invested, it was helpful to my finance.
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Hello Bo Im!
Financial literacy is what every professional aims to possess along with financial freedom. There are even those who train people even in their old age how to handle their retirement pay or pension because a big amount of money can be overwhelming. Anyway, as you have stated below, efficiency is hard to achieve, however, possible. There are experts who may help us when we need assistance. I just hope they do not offer an insurance. ^^
Thank you for this answer. See you in an hour!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
Or: It is not easy to handle finance efficiently.
I happened to be consulted by a securities firm about asset management, and sometimes they give me good information.
>> Correct!
When I listened to their information and invested, it was helpful to my finance.
>> Correct!
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