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2012-02-16 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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1. Let's go to the theater as soon as school finishes. 2. --- What do you know the farming population of China? --- Oh, I am not quite sure. Maybe China has a farming population of 800 million. 3. Sugar is made of carbon, hydrogen and oxygen. 4. By the time he came back from Australia, his daughter didn't go to school. 5. "I want to buy your plan," said the businessman. I was very busy yesterday. Because I didn't went to work for two days. I had a holiday. So I had a lot of things to process. I would recieve too much mails that are almost books everyday. For two days, it was piled high on my desk. I registered these all morning, and I processed my boss's order all afternoon. My boss asked a report about utilization of international academic journal. Actually, She had asked it long time ago. I have finished it yesterday, I gave it to her. The report was my big worry. But she has not mentioned it yet, so I'm nervous.

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Hello Miss. [Name], thank you so much for making your composition today.. :) JOb well done on your composition my dera and about your work, I\'m really hoping that everything will be okay.. Talk to you again later my dear..^^ Teacher Cam^^ 1. Let\'s go to the theater as soon as school finishes. >>correct2. --- What do you know the farming population of China? >>What is the farming population of China?--- Oh, I am not quite sure. Maybe China has a farming population of 800 million. >>correct3. Sugar is made of carbon, hydrogen and oxygen. >>correct >>Sugar consists of carbon, hydrogen and oxygen.4. By the time he came back from Australia, his daughter didn\'t go to school. >>By the time he would return from Australia, his daughter finishes school.5. \"I want to buy your plan,\" said the businessman. >>I understood your plan, said the businessman.I was very busy yesterday. >>correctBecause I didn\'t went to work for two days. I had a holiday. >>Because I didn\'t go to work for two days, I had a vacation.So I had a lot of things to process. >>correctI would recieve too much mails that are almost books everyday. >>correctFor two days, it was piled high on my desk. >>correctI registered these all morning, and I processed my boss\'s order all afternoon. >>correctMy boss asked a report about utilization of international academic journal. >>correctActually, She had asked it long time ago. I have finished it yesterday, I gave it to her. >>correctThe report was my big worry. >>correctBut she has not mentioned it yet, so I\'m nervous. >>correct  

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