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In my opinion, meat is very imfortant. Because meat is delicious. And our body need protein. Meat have abundant protein. therefore, we must to eat meat.

Hello dear. Thank you for sending me your composition. You did a great job. But you also have to focus on your grammar. Practice makes Perfect. Have a great day!! T. Lorraine ^^, In my opinion, meat is very imfortant. >> In my opinion, meat is very impotant. Because meat is delicious. >> CORRECT And our body need protein. >>And our body needs protein. Meat have abundant protein. >>Meat has abundant protein. therefore, we must to eat meat. >>Therefore, we must eat meat.