Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Homework
강사 첨삭
Hi John:)
This is true.
Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.
-Teacher EliseI want to change the system of having less P.E class and other special classes.
>> CORRECT
There are a lot of things that students must learn.
>> CORRECT
But in South Korea, most people emphasize only the subjects such as math, science, and English.
>> But in South Korea, most people emphasize only on subjects such as Math, Science, and English.
But there are so many things to learn more.
>> CORRECT
Teaching about other things about the world is also important as learning about math, science, and English.
>> CORRECT
So I want to change the system that having less special classes.
>> So I want to change the system about having less special classes.
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