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It\'s good to have a garden. But I don\'t need it because I don\'t use it often even if I am at home. It\'s really hard to grow a garden. What about you? But there are many good things about having a garden.
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Hi [이름],
Gardening helps improve your mood, stabilize feelings of anxiety and depression, and overall, reduce feelings of stress and stress incidents. Gardening can fill a person with a sense of purpose and achievement and is a very high reward. Enjoy the nature ~ Teacher Quenny:)
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It\'s good to have a garden.
>>It\'s good to have a garden in the front or the backyard of the house.
But I don\'t need it because I don\'t use it often even if I am at home.
>> But I don\'t need a garden because I\'m not used to it even if I am at home.
It\'s really hard to grow a garden. What about you?
>> It\'s really hard to grow and maintain a garden. What about you?
But there are many good things about having a garden.
>> But there are many good things about having a garden like gardening relieves your stress.
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It\'s good to have a garden. But I don\'t need it because I don\'t use it often even if I am at home. It\'s really hard to grow a garden. What about you? But there are many good things about having a garden.
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