Homework
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The advantage of video conferencing is that it can save time to travel to the meeting place.
I think there is no disadvantage.
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The advantage of video conferencing is that it can save time to travel to the meeting place.
>> The advantage of video conferencing is that it can help us save time on travelling to the meeting place.
I think there is no disadvantage.
I think there is no disadvantage.
>> Correct
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