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When I feel a stress, I usually try to do something to forget it.
Something like swimming, watching movie, deep sleep....
And then, It make me feeling better.
강사 첨삭
Hi James!
Don\'t give in to stress.
Keep fighting and find a balance in your life.
Everybody deserves peace and happiness.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
When I feel a stress, I usually try to do something to forget it.
>> When I feel stressed, I usually try to do something to forget it.
Something like swimming, watching movie, deep sleep....
Something like swimming, watching movie, deep sleep....
>> I do things like swimming, watching movies, having a deep sleep and others.
And then, It make me feeling better.
And then, It make me feeling better.
>> Those usually make me feel better afterwards.
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