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What does your luggage contain when travelling?
--> At first, I am so happy to imagine about packing my luggage for travelling.
When I pack my luggage, I should think of my contact lens tools because my weak eyesight.
Also, there have to be some cosmetics(especially sunscreens) for my beautiful skin.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Bo Im!
Well, you need to be happy packing your luggage because that means loads of fun being away from the challenges and stress from work. I think you have all of your essentials mentioned here. Thus, when the time is right, pack your bag and conquer the world!
I am grateful for this answer. See you in less than an hour!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
When I pack my luggage, I should think of my contact lens tools because my weak eyesight.
>> When I pack my luggage, I should think of my contact lens tools because of my weak eyesight.
Also, there have to be some cosmetics(especially sunscreens) for my beautiful skin.
>> Also, there has to be some cosmetics (especially sunscreen) for my beautiful skin.
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