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2021-12-27 · 첨삭 강사 Andrea

학생이 쓴 원문

I ate the Spring Rolls with my friends last weekend. I will eat the chicken and pizza at home with my family this weekend. And I will practice the interview for test on this Saturday.

강사 첨삭

Hi Julie!^^ 

Weekends are actually best spent with our loved ones. 
Either we eat out to our favorite restaurant or simply stay at home and eat home cooked food. 
All we wish is for the weekends to be longer.

Teacher Andrea 

I ate the Spring Rolls with my friends last weekend.
>> I ate spring rolls with my friends last weekend.  

I will eat the chicken and pizza at home with my family this weekend. 
>> I will eat chicken and pizza with my family at home this weekend. 

And I will practice the interview for test on this Saturday.
>> And, I will practice for the interview this Saturday. 


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