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Noise bothers me a lot. Since I lived nearby express bus terminal in the middle of Seoul city, I suffered from a lot of noise. Buses ran early in the morning every day, so I had to wake up early. The car noise was serious all day long. So, I became very sensitive. Even though my friends envied me living in the central city, it was very stressful for me. I lived there for 7 years, and I moved to the quiet town recently. Then I could stay calm.
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Since I lived nearby express bus terminal in the middle of Seoul city, I suffered from a lot of noise.
>>Since I lived near an express bus terminal in the middle of Seoul city, I suffered from the noise.
Buses ran early in the morning every day, so I had to wake up early.
>>correct
The car noise was serious all day long.
>>correct
So, I became very sensitive.
>>correct
Even though my friends envied me living in the central city, it was very stressful for me.
>>correct
I lived there for 7 years, and I moved to the quiet town recently.
>>I lived there for 7 years, and I moved to the quiet town recently.
Then I could stay calm.
>>correct
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