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2021-12-27 · 첨삭 강사 Jasmin

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I think the police should be stricter. Every time I read news articles about crimes, I got angry because of the incompetence of Korean Police. Criminals are not punished properly, and victims suffer a lot. Police don’t protect the victims, too. So many Koreans don’t trust the police. People think that they have no place to lean on and police system is just a waste of tax. This reality needs to change.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], thank you for this. Have a great day!
Jasmin

I think the police should be stricter.
>>I think the police should be more strict.
Every time I read news articles about crimes, I got angry because of the incompetence of Korean Police.
>>I feel angry about the incompetence of Korean police men, every time I read news articles about crimes
Criminals are not punished properly, and victims suffer a lot.
>>Criminals are not getting the right punishment and the victims suffer a lot.
Police don’t protect the victims, too.
>>Police officers don\'t protect the victims too.
So many Koreans don’t trust the police.
>>So many Koreans don\'t trust the police.
People think that they have no place to lean on and police system is just a waste of tax.
>>People think that police organization are a hopeless case and it\'s just a waste of tax.
This reality needs to change.
>>This reality needs to change.

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