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I am the only person who throw away household trash in my family’s’ house. That’s my duty. So, I collect and classify trashes first. Then I recycle them. I wash all the plastic things before I put them in the recycling bin. Because I’ve heard that ‘washed plastics’ could be more recycled than dirty ones. Also, I separate plastic bottles and vinyl labels because of the same reason. The pet bottles without vinyl labels can be recycled well. I learned all of this from environment education. I just hope the earth doesn’t hurt anymore.
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Jasmin
I am the only person who throw away household trash in my family’s’ house.>>I am the only person in our house who throws away the household trash.
That’s my duty. So, I collect and classify trashes first.
>>It\'s my duty at home to collect and classify trashes.
Then I recycle them.
>>They I recycle them.
I wash all the plastic things before I put them in the recycling bin.
>>I wash all the plastics then put them in a recycle bin.
Because I’ve heard that ‘washed plastics’ could be more recycled than dirty ones.
>>Because I heard that washed plastics are easier to recycle.
Also, I separate plastic bottles and vinyl labels because of the same reason.
>>Also, I separate the plastic bottles and the vinyl labels because of the same reason.
The pet bottles without vinyl labels can be recycled well. I learned all of this from environment education.
>>The pet bottles without vinyl labels can be recycled easily. I learned all of that in a seminar about the environment.
I just hope the earth doesn’t hurt anymore.
>>I just hope that our eat will heal soon.
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