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I think having an enough conversation is the most important thing about community. Every time we have a conflict, we neglect the conversation and discussion. However, to fully understand each other and come up with best alternative, we must talk! Also, we should learn how to respect and hear other’s opinion. Communication skills would be important. I think the right conversation and discussion create a better community.
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Jasmin
>>I think communication is the most important thing about the community.
Every time we have a conflict, we neglect the conversation and discussion.
>>The cause of misunderstanding and conflict is because we don\'t like to communicate with other people.
However, to fully understand each other and come up with best alternative, we must talk!
>>We need to communicate with each other so we can fully understand each other.
Also, we should learn how to respect and hear other’s opinion.
>>Also, we should learn how to respect other\'s opinion and idea.
Communication skills would be important.
>>Having a good communication skill is very important.
I think the right conversation and discussion create a better community.
>>I think the right communication creates a peaceful and a better community.
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