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2021-12-30 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

학생이 쓴 원문

1. One day, we could colonize Mars. 2. She has no interest of politics. 3. I was happy to see my old friends again. 4. Parents must discourage children to develop unhealthy habits. 5. She is your neighbor, isn\'t she? 6. It was so cold today that we did not go out. 7. It is time you go home. 8. The driver was fatally injured in the accident. 9. I recommend to go on a diet. 10. They made me to repeat the whole story.

강사 첨삭

Good evening [이름]!  I appreciate your efforts in doing your homework. You are such a good student. ^_^
T. Irene
1. One day, we could colonize Mars.
>>>  One day, we can colonize Mars
2. She has no interest of politics.
>>> She has no interest in politics.
3. I was happy to see my old friends again.
>>> Correct.
4. Parents must discourage children to develop unhealthy habits.
>>> Parents must discourage children from developing unhealthy habits.
5. She is your neighbor, isn\'t she?
>>> Correct. 
6. It was so cold today that we did not go out.
>>> Correct. 
7. It is time you go home.
>>> Correct. 
8. The driver was fatally injured in the accident.
>>> Correct. 
9. I recommend to go on a diet.
>>> I recommend for you to go on a diet.
10. They made me to repeat the whole story.
>>> They made me repeat the whole story.



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