homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I will travel Hong Kong and enjoy my life in there. It was a big success for me to go Hong Kong as an exchange student. And I am so excited for hanging out to the city with my foreign friends. I think this experience would be the best New Year gift for me.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]. Great job doing the homework and thank you for sharing your thoughts on the topic. I wish you an awesome and wonderful new year. This year seems exciting for you and it surely is something to look forward to. Have a great time in Hong Kong. ~Teacher Jane c\",)
I will travel Hong Kong and enjoy my life in there.
>> I will travel to Hong Kong and enjoy my life there.
It was a big success for me to go Hong Kong as an exchange student.
>> It was a big success for me to go to Hong Kong as an exchange student.
And I am so excited for hanging out to the city with my foreign friends.
>> And I am so excited to hang out in the city with my foreign friends.
I think this experience would be the best New Year gift for me.
>> I think this experience would be the best New Year\'s gift for me.
I will travel Hong Kong and enjoy my life in there.
>> I will travel to Hong Kong and enjoy my life there.
It was a big success for me to go Hong Kong as an exchange student.
>> It was a big success for me to go to Hong Kong as an exchange student.
And I am so excited for hanging out to the city with my foreign friends.
>> And I am so excited to hang out in the city with my foreign friends.
I think this experience would be the best New Year gift for me.
>> I think this experience would be the best New Year\'s gift for me.
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