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My uncle is the car enthusiast. He knows cars very well and he is a good driver. He drove a camping car when our family went to the countryside during our summer vacation. Also, his son (my cousin) also loves cars. He drives his dads’ car and travel around the city. I envy them because I don’t have a drivers license at all.
강사 첨삭
Good morning [이름]!
I wish I could drive too!
Maybe someday you would be able to get your driver\'s license, so don\'t worry.
In a few months or years you will be owning a car and driving it in Seoul city :)
Good luck!
My uncle is the car enthusiast.
>>> My uncle is a car enthusiast.
He knows cars very well and he is a good driver.
>>> CORRECT!
OR: He knows cars well and drives well.
He drove a camping car when our family went to the countryside during our summer vacation.
>>> CORRECT!
Also, his son (my cousin) also loves cars.
>>> CORRECT!
He drives his dads’ car and travel around the city.
>>> He drives his dad’s car and travel around the city.
I envy them because I don’t have a drivers license at all.
>>> I envy them because I don’t have a driver\'s license at all.
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