homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you like shopping?
I like shopping a lot.
I go shopping to buy groceries,clothes and cosmetics.
There are many shopping center in Seoul.
I usually go to shoppingcenter once a week.
When I want to buy clothes, I go to outlet with my friends.
I don’t know the trend well. So my friends advice me to buy clothes.
I am happy to have a friend who has a knowledge of trend.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]ny! Your work is
comprehensible and well-structured. Great job! However, don’t confuse the noun advice with the verb advise.
- Debbie
Do you like shopping?
I like shopping a lot.
>> This is a good sentence.
I go shopping to buy groceries,clothes and cosmetics.
>> I go shopping to buy groceries, clothes, and cosmetics.
There are many shopping center in Seoul.
>> There are many shopping centers in Seoul.
I usually go to shoppingcenter once a week.
>> I usually go to a shopping center once a week.
When I want to buy clothes, I go to outlet with my friends.
>> When I want to buy clothes, I go to an outlet with my friends.
I don’t know the trend well. So my friends advice me to buy clothes.
>> I don\'t know much about the trend, so my friends give me advice about clothes.
I am happy to have a friend who has a knowledge of trend.
>> I am happy to have friends who have knowledge about the trend.
- Debbie
Do you like shopping?
I like shopping a lot.
>> This is a good sentence.
I go shopping to buy groceries,clothes and cosmetics.
>> I go shopping to buy groceries, clothes, and cosmetics.
There are many shopping center in Seoul.
>> There are many shopping centers in Seoul.
I usually go to shoppingcenter once a week.
>> I usually go to a shopping center once a week.
When I want to buy clothes, I go to outlet with my friends.
>> When I want to buy clothes, I go to an outlet with my friends.
I don’t know the trend well. So my friends advice me to buy clothes.
>> I don\'t know much about the trend, so my friends give me advice about clothes.
I am happy to have a friend who has a knowledge of trend.
>> I am happy to have friends who have knowledge about the trend.
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