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2022-01-04 · 첨삭 강사 Debbie

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Do you like shopping? I like shopping a lot. I go shopping to buy groceries,clothes and cosmetics. There are many shopping center in Seoul. I usually go to shoppingcenter once a week. When I want to buy clothes, I go to outlet with my friends. I don’t know the trend well. So my friends advice me to buy clothes. I am happy to have a friend who has a knowledge of trend.

강사 첨삭


Hi, [이름]ny!  Your work is comprehensible and well-structured. Great job!  However, don’t confuse the noun advice with the verb advise.


- Debbie 


Do you like shopping?

I like shopping a lot.
>> This is a good sentence.

I go shopping to buy groceries,clothes and cosmetics.
>> I go shopping to buy groceries, clothes, and cosmetics.

There are many shopping center in Seoul.
>> There are many shopping centers in Seoul. 

I usually go to shoppingcenter once a week.
>> I usually go to a shopping center once a week.

When I want to buy clothes, I go to outlet with my friends.
>> When I want to buy clothes, I go to an outlet with my friends.

I don’t know the trend well. So my friends advice me to buy clothes.
>> I don\'t know much about the trend, so my friends give me advice about clothes.

I am happy to have a friend who has a knowledge of trend.
>> I am happy to have friends who have knowledge about the trend.

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