homework

2022-01-07 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

I want to try making a cake ! And read some more books ! And what I really want to do is lose weight. TT And I will never get hurt in the new year !! And in the new year, I\'m going to act nice and right like last year.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I want to try making a cake ! And read some more books !

>> I want to try making a cake and reading some more books!

And what I really want to do is lose weight. TT
>> What I really want to do is lose weight.
And I will never get hurt in the new year !!
>> I will never get hurt in the new year!!
And in the new year, I\'m going to act nice and right like last year.
>> In the new year, I\'m going to act nice and right like last year.

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