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2012-02-20 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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Who's your best friend? How long have you known him/her? My best friend is peco! she's the same age as me. We live in the same neighborhood. We met eight years ago at art academy when I was high school student. she is very kind and sweet! Cheerful~and Very lovely girl! she is usually outgoing. but, I always shy in front of unfamiliar people. she is just opposite of me. We see each other twice a week and talking about Dream! and drink! haha We have a lot of memory. I can trust her since I can share all my secrets with her.

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Hello Mary! Thank you for sharing something about your best friend. I am happy that you still get to see her twice a week. See you later! Teacher Faye   Here are your corrections: Who\'s your best friend? How long have you known him/her?My best friend is peco! >>My best friend\'s name is peco. she\'s the same age as me. >>We are of the same age.We live in the same neighborhood. >>Correct!We met eight years ago at art academy when I was high school student. >>We met eight years ago, when we were high school, at the Art Academy. she is very kind and sweet! Cheerful~and Very lovely girl! >>She is very kind, sweet, cheerful and she is a very lovely girl.she is usually outgoing. >>She is an outgoing person. but, I always shy in front of unfamiliar people. >>Unlike me, I am shy, especially when I am in front of unfamiliar people. she is just opposite of me. >>She is just my opposite.We see each other twice a week and talking about Dream! and drink! Haha >>We see each other twice a week and we go out and have a few drinks and talk about our dreams. Haha!We have a lot of memory. >>We have a lot of memorable times together.I can trust her since I can share all my secrets with her. >>Correct!  

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