homework!
학생이 쓴 원문
Who's your best friend? How long have you known him/her?
My best friend is peco! she's the same age as me.
We live in the same neighborhood.
We met eight years ago at art academy when I was high school student.
she is very kind and sweet! Cheerful~and Very lovely girl!
she is usually outgoing. but, I always shy in front of unfamiliar people.
she is just opposite of me.
We see each other twice a week and talking about Dream! and drink! haha
We have a lot of memory.
I can trust her since I can share all my secrets with her.
강사 첨삭
Hello Mary!
Thank you for sharing something about your best friend. I am happy that you still get to see her twice a week. See you later!
Teacher Faye
Here are your corrections:
Who\'s your best friend? How long have you known him/her?My best friend is peco!
>>My best friend\'s name is peco.
she\'s the same age as me.
>>We are of the same age.We live in the same neighborhood.
>>Correct!We met eight years ago at art academy when I was high school student.
>>We met eight years ago, when we were high school, at the Art Academy. she is very kind and sweet! Cheerful~and Very lovely girl!
>>She is very kind, sweet, cheerful and she is a very lovely girl.she is usually outgoing.
>>She is an outgoing person.
but, I always shy in front of unfamiliar people.
>>Unlike me, I am shy, especially when I am in front of unfamiliar people. she is just opposite of me.
>>She is just my opposite.We see each other twice a week and talking about Dream! and drink! Haha
>>We see each other twice a week and we go out and have a few drinks and talk about our dreams. Haha!We have a lot of memory.
>>We have a lot of memorable times together.I can trust her since I can share all my secrets with her.
>>Correct!
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