Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Writing Task: What are your plans this year?
: I\'m going to learn how to English talk. When I in graduate lab, there are many foreign students. So I must upgrate the English talking skill.
1. What can you do best?
: I was best in the exercise. Actually I had enjoyed the weight tranning in gym. But COVID-19 interrupted me. So I can\'t weight tranning in gym. I\'m sad.
2. How do you maintain your good skill?
: I follow the exercise video at home or running at the Han river track. Walking is my best execise now.
강사 첨삭
Good morning Yu [이름]!
Taking a walk in Han River would be perfect every day - hahaha.
You will enjoy fresh air and a good view!
Thank you for sharing :)
I\'m going to learn how to English talk.
>>> I\'m going to learn how to speak English.
When I in graduate lab, there are many foreign students.
>>> When I was in the graduate school lab, there were many foreign students.
So I must upgrate the English talking skill.
>>> So I must upgrade my English speaking skill.
1. What can you do best?
I was best in the exercise.
>>> I was good at exercising.
Actually I had enjoyed the weight tranning in gym.
>>> Actually, I enjoyed weight training at the gym.
But COVID-19 interrupted me.
>>> But COVID-19 interfered with me.
So I can\'t weight tranning in gym.
>>> So I can\'t do weight training at the gym
I\'m sad.
>>> CORRECT!
OR: That\'s sad.
2. How do you maintain your good skill?
I follow the exercise video at home or running at the Han river track.
>>> I follow exercise video at home or run in Han river.
Walking is my best execise now.
>>> CORRECT!
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