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Thank you for writing this Yu[이름]! I enjoyed reading it. There are some corrections, but overall, this was fun to read. - Teacher Ivy
Travelling take a lot of money and energy.

>> Travelling takes a lot of money and energy.

 I like meeting friends more than travelling.

>> Correct
Actually, I have many travelling experiences.

>> I actually have a lot of travel experiences.

But that\'s not mean I like travelling, just my friends like travelling.

>> But that doesn’t mean I like travelling. It’s just my friends that likes travelling.
So I love my friends, I join to travelling unavoidably.

>> Since I love my friends, it’s unavoidable to join travelling.

Sometime it is so funny, but I don\'t want to pay many money at tourist attraction.
>> Sometime it’s so funny, but I don\'t want to pay a lot of money at a tourist attraction.
I have a chicken allergy.

>> Correct

When I was in middle school, I found it.

>> I was in middle school when I found out.

I really sad to them, so I can\'t eat anything as snack, raman, fried chicken.

>> I’m really sad about it, so I can\'t eat anything as a snack, raman, or fried chicken.
I don\'t know chicken is in any food about that time.

>> I didn’t know chicken was in my food that time.

I was really carefull, when I was young.

>> I was really careful, when I was young. 

But these days, my allergy become weak.

>> But these days, my allergy became weak.

I often take medicine and sometimes eat a few chicken.

>> I often take medicine when I sometimes eat a few chicken.

It become weak than my middle school days, but it remain.

>> It became weaker compared to my middle school days, but it remains.