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I want to recommend starfield.
Because it has cinema, foodcourt, shopping and sports center.
It would be fun if you visited starfield.
강사 첨삭
Good morning Ms. [Name]!
Hmmm, I would love to visit that place.
Maybe someday, I would be able to go to Starfield.
I want to recommend starfield.
>>> CORRECT!
Because it has cinema, foodcourt, shopping and sports center.
>>> This is because there are movie theaters, food courts, shopping, and sports centers.
It would be fun if you visited starfield.
>>> It will be fun if you visit Starfield.
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