Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. What kind of business do you want to set up?
-> I want to set up a restaurant. Because I think many young people don\'t go to cafe twice. They think \"coffee flavor is same anywhere\". But if dining is so tasty in a restaurant, they think \"Let\'s go the restaurnt again, it was so delicious\". So if i put up a business, I\'m going to set up a restaurant.
2. What are the dangers of having our own business?
-> Anxiety of future. Owner don\'t know today\'s customer and future customer. So they feel anxiety of future.
Today\'s diary.
I met my best friend E.S. We talked about our past life for 10 hours. Girl\'s talk is so funny, we were beware of the passage of time. Just talking all the time. Actaully, I want to talk more. But she must go her home. It was so sad.
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Hello, Yu [이름]. Good job with the homework. You have good writing skills and you can express yourself very well through writing. I hope the following corrections will help you become a better writer. Good luck! ~Jane c\",)
1. What kind of business do you want to set up?
I want to set up a restaurant. Because I think many young people don\'t go to cafe twice.
>> I want to set up a restaurant because I think many young people don\'t go to the same cafe twice.
They think \"coffee flavor is same anywhere\".
>> They think, \"Coffee flavors are the same everywhere.\"
But if dining is so tasty in a restaurant, they think \"Let\'s go the restaurnt again, it was so delicious\".
>> But if the meal is so tasty in a restaurant, they would think \"Let\'s go to that restaurant again, it was so delicious.\"
So if i put up a business, I\'m going to set up a restaurant.
>> So if I put up a business, I\'m going to set up a restaurant.
2. What are the dangers of having our own business?
Anxiety of future.
>> There is anxiety about the future.
Owner don\'t know today\'s customer and future customer.
>> The owner does not know the preference of today\'s customers and future customers.
So they feel anxiety of future.
>> So they feel anxious about the future.
Today\'s diary.
I met my best friend E.S.
>> CORRECT =)
We talked about our past life for 10 hours.
>> We talked about what has been going on in our lives for 10 hours.
Girl\'s talk is so funny, we were beware of the passage of time.
>> Girl talk is so fun, we were not aware of the passage of time.
Just talking all the time.
>> We just talked all the time.
Actaully, I want to talk more. But she must go her home.
>> Actually, I wanted to talk more but she had to go home.
It was so sad.
>> CORRECT =)
1. What kind of business do you want to set up?
I want to set up a restaurant. Because I think many young people don\'t go to cafe twice.
>> I want to set up a restaurant because I think many young people don\'t go to the same cafe twice.
They think \"coffee flavor is same anywhere\".
>> They think, \"Coffee flavors are the same everywhere.\"
But if dining is so tasty in a restaurant, they think \"Let\'s go the restaurnt again, it was so delicious\".
>> But if the meal is so tasty in a restaurant, they would think \"Let\'s go to that restaurant again, it was so delicious.\"
So if i put up a business, I\'m going to set up a restaurant.
>> So if I put up a business, I\'m going to set up a restaurant.
2. What are the dangers of having our own business?
Anxiety of future.
>> There is anxiety about the future.
Owner don\'t know today\'s customer and future customer.
>> The owner does not know the preference of today\'s customers and future customers.
So they feel anxiety of future.
>> So they feel anxious about the future.
Today\'s diary.
I met my best friend E.S.
>> CORRECT =)
We talked about our past life for 10 hours.
>> We talked about what has been going on in our lives for 10 hours.
Girl\'s talk is so funny, we were beware of the passage of time.
>> Girl talk is so fun, we were not aware of the passage of time.
Just talking all the time.
>> We just talked all the time.
Actaully, I want to talk more. But she must go her home.
>> Actually, I wanted to talk more but she had to go home.
It was so sad.
>> CORRECT =)
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