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2022-01-10 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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What should we look forward to a high school reunion? -> When we attend a high school reunion, I think we have the highest expectation of meeting friends we haven\'t met for a long time. In particular, since I lived in a dormitory in high school, I am curious about the recent lives of my friends who lived together. However, since I graduated from girls\' high school, it doesn\'t seem easier to meet each other.

강사 첨삭

Hello there, Bo Im!

It\'s wonderful to read from you again! It is fascinating to meet our friends in the past and reminisce some of the things we have done. Moreover, we could laugh at the silly things we\'ve made. So when there\'s a great chance for you to see them again, you should meet them by all means. After all, they have been a part of one of the most interesting phases of your life.

See you later in class.

-T. Donna =)

When we attend a high school reunion, I think we have the highest expectation of meeting friends we haven\'t met for a long time.
>> Correct!

In particular, since I lived in a dormitory in high school, I am curious about the recent lives of my friends who lived together.
>> In particular, since I lived in a dormitory in high school, I was curious about the recent lives of my friends who I lived with together.

However, since I graduated from girls\' high school, it doesn\'t seem easier to meet each other.
>>  However, since I graduated from a girls\' high school, it doesn\'t seem easier to meet each other.

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