Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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- Teacher Sophia
Actaully, I\'m not. For example, I don\'t like the fast fashion.
>> Actually, I don\'t. For example, I don\'t like the trends in fashion.
When that trends go away, I can\'t wear the trends clothes.
>> When that trend is not trending anymore, I don\'t wear the clothes.
I feel shy because I think the clothes were old. Just because time has passed, I can\'t wear the clothes.
>> I feel shy because I think that the clothes were old. Just because time has passed, I can\'t wear the clothes anymore.
So, I don\'t want to pay attention to trends. But this is inevitable.
>> Correct
We live with a lot of people, we are social animals.
>> Correct
So we should follow the trends to some extent.
>> Correct
I don\'t pay attention to trend as fast fashion, but I sometimes follow the trend as social\'s things.
>> I don\'t pay attention to trends as fast fashion, but I sometimes follow the trend to fit in.
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