Homework

2022-01-11 · 첨삭 강사 Sophia

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Do you pay attention to trends? : Actaully, I\'m not. For example, I don\'t like the fast fashion. When that trends go away, I can\'t wear the trends clothes. I feel shy because I think the clothes were old. Just because time has passed, I can\'t wear the clothes. So, I don\'t want to pay attention to trends. But this is inevitable. We live with a lot of people, we are social animals. So we should follow the trends to some extent. I don\'t pay attention to trend as fast fashion, but I sometimes follow the trend as social\'s things. Today\'s diary Today, I found the club of English speaking. I joined a graduate school two week ago, I going to the lab in next monday. So I will watch the situation of lab, if situation is okay, I\'m going to connect the club owner. I really want to grow up my speaking skill for my dream.

강사 첨삭

Good day, Agee! Thank you for answering the homework today. I am glad that you make some efforts to excel in your English study. See you in our class! :)
- Teacher Sophia


 Actaully, I\'m not. For example, I don\'t like the fast fashion. 

>> Actually, I don\'t. For example, I don\'t like the trends in fashion.

When that trends go away, I can\'t wear the trends clothes. 

>> When that trend is not trending anymore, I don\'t wear the clothes. 

I feel shy because I think the clothes were old. Just because time has passed, I can\'t wear the clothes. 

>> I feel shy because I think that the clothes were old. Just because time has passed, I can\'t wear the clothes anymore.

So, I don\'t want to pay attention to trends. But this is inevitable. 

>> Correct

We live with a lot of people, we are social animals. 

>> Correct

So we should follow the trends to some extent. 

>> Correct

I don\'t pay attention to trend as fast fashion, but I sometimes follow the trend as social\'s things.

>> I don\'t pay attention to trends as fast fashion, but I sometimes follow the trend to fit in.

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