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2022-01-12 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

What are the advantage of technology? Technology gives us convenience. It replaces people have to do something. So people should get rest and doing exercise too. We find a lot of information from internet. It makes people alive longer.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:

Technology gives us convenience.
>> CORRECT!
It replaces people have to do something.
>> It replaces the things that people need to do.
So people should get rest and doing exercise too.
>> So people can get rest and do exercise too.
We find a lot of information from internet.
>> CORRECT!
It makes people alive longer.
>> It makes people live longer.

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