Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. I need to culture life once a week.
Because it is my healing.
2. I should do pilates twice a week, then i have healthy body and get muscle.
3. I try to eat regular meal thrice a day for my health!
강사 첨삭
Good morning Ella!
Thank you for completing the patterns and see you later :)
1. I need to culture life once a week.
Because it is my healing.
>>> I need culture of life once a week because it is my healing.
2. I should do pilates twice a week, then i have healthy body and get muscle.
>>> I should do Pilates twice a week for me to have a healthy body and gain muscles.
3. I try to eat regular meal thrice a day for my health!
>>> I try to eat regularly three times a day for my health!
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