homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Fran! Thank you for sharing this experience. I guess it was hard for you to have a trip with someone whom you don\'t get along with.
I enjoy what your fingers are saying through writing ^^ ( that is a quote)
Take care!
Aki~
It was when I went on a trip to Spain and Portugal with a coworker in 2008.
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She and I passed the teacher employment exam in the same year and started working as teachers in the same school.
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As beginner teachers, we depended on each other and shared many things, including secrets.
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And we would read books together, including a Spanish novel, which made us decide to go on a trip to the attractive country.
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Several days before the trip, however, I found that many other teachers didn\'t like her because of her selfish and impolite behaviors, which were not shown in front of me.
>>> However, several days before the trip, I found that many teachers didn\'t like her because of her selfish and impolite behaviors which she doesn\'t show in front of me.
She also told my private affairs to another coworker and said and did different things from what she pretended to me.
>>> She also told my private affairs to another coworker and said different things from what she pretended to me.
I was hurt and felt betrayed. I burst out in anger at her.
>>> I was hurt and felt betrayed. I burst out my anger at her.
But it was around the corner of the trip and too late to cancel it. So we couldn\'t help but proceed with the trip.
>>> But the trip was just around the corner and it\'s too late to cancel so we just proceeded with it.
Throughout the travel, I tried not to have any feelings about her and thought that she was just a tour mate.
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Nevertheless, I was confused and sad with the situation even while in the exotic and thrilling places.
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She and I even had a quarrel during the trip because we had different opinions on accommodation.
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or >>> We even quarreled during our trip because we had different opinions on accommodation.
For a while after the trip, I rarely saw her.
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But time flew, and there were some chances to work with her, which made me let go of the resentment about her.
>>> But time flew, and there were some chances to work with her, which made me let go of the resentment I had toward her.
But I still have complex feelings about her. Perhaps I need some more time.
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